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Vegeta by ~Gosha-Chan:iconGosha-Chan:

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*~ Vegeta ~*

Cold like the Winter wind,
Heartless but strong,
Blind by your pride and victory,
Always bad and in the wrong.

Foolish and thoughtless,
Full of hate and betrayal,
Small but not fragile,
You torture and blackmail.

You have the heart of darkness,
And the fists of fear,
With the eyes of a fire,
That daren't shed a tear

With the instinct of a predator,
Hungry for war,
Thirsty for blood,
Desiring more.

But inside that body,
With overconfidence and control,
There is something special,
Vegeta, your soul.
©2006-2010 ~Gosha-Chan
:icongosha-chan:

Author's Comments

Well i done this about a year ago and i have always loved this poem. I was never a Vegeta fan, never really liked him until i sat down one night and just wrote this. Since then i've come to respect the character^_^ This is based on his evil days hehe. He was better back then i reckon.

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=TheGuyss4 Jun 9, 2006, 9:19:21 AM
Ooh, how deep and sentimental! =D

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Christian, not perfect. There IS a difference, you know. :P
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"What I look forward to is continued immaturity followed by death." -Dave Barry
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~Sunshineteen Jun 9, 2006, 9:32:52 AM
oooh its suits him so well!!!!!!

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I hear Jerusalem bells are ringing
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
(Viva La Vida)
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*Sweetbean882006 Jun 9, 2006, 10:21:26 AM
Wow! Well done! and very well written! I love it! I will fave this one! :heart: ^-^

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:sarcasticclap: Whoopie- flippin'- doo! -Edward Elric :sarcasticclap:
:iconjyasumine:
~Jyasumine Jun 9, 2006, 11:23:11 AM
This made me smile. I especially liked your use of those almost contradictions, like 'small but not fragile'. And theres a typo in the second line of the second verse! Tsk..^^
I so prefered the evil Vegeta..he actually won fights! lol

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:heart:Anime Bishonen:heart:
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=genaminna Jun 10, 2006, 12:41:27 AM
not to be mean, but... :( I liked all of it until the last line... just seemed a little corny to me, compared to the rest of it. but like i said, I really really was feeling the rest :) :heart:

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"There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so." ~Shakespeare
"If you sacrifice liberty for security, you will lose both." ~Ron Paul
"A life lived in fear is a life half lived." ~Spanish Proverb
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~dragonzmoon Jun 10, 2006, 10:52:40 AM
OMK!! That is so him! I love it! :+favlove:

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The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. Mahatma Gandhi (1869 - 1948)
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~princessmarina Jun 12, 2006, 1:54:55 AM
woooo yeah thats so Vegeta i agree :D well done Gosha :clap:

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"I've been having theses weird thoughts lately... like is any of this for real... or not..."

I :heart: Sora forever!

Cloud:heart:Tifa Kaname:heart:Yuki
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Mood: Love ~dino-dino-dinosaur Feb 7, 2007, 11:38:37 AM
Great, I love it. Listen to the song ' I slept with someone in fall out boy' by Fall Out Boy. That song always reminds me of Vegeta ^^.
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Mood: Joy ~tharuka Feb 9, 2007, 7:06:26 AM
love the poem , really fits Vegeta ,

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~A wise man has long eyes , big ears and a short tongue~
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